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I already have the paper written it keeps getting returned and I just cant seem to get what they want out of it. The rubric: Has to include both sources which I\\’ve provided. incorporates an analysis essay and addresses an appropriate topic. effective introduction with adequate detail. appropriate thesis statement that previews 2 to 4 causes. logical explanation of the causes of the problem with adequate detail. logical evidence to support the claim with adequate detail. a conclusion that effectively summarizes the essay\u2019s content. incorporates 2 academically credible sources in the body of the essay. includes in-text citations and references for content that is quoted, paraphrased, or summarized and demonstrates a consistent application of APA style. Content reflects attention to detail, is organized, and focuses on the main ideas as prescribed in the task or chosen by the candidate. Terminology is pertinent, is used correctly, and effectively conveys the intended meaning. Mechanics, usage, and grammar promote accurate interpretation and understanding. This is an email I received from my prof on my recent submission: We still need a thesis that states the problem and distinct causes. We might say: Weak adherence to the FDA guidelines regarding vaccines is a growing problem caused by misinformation on the internet and lax rules regarding exemptions for vaccines. Main Points: Each main point needs to identify the cause and explain how it causes people NOT to adhere to FDA guidelines. We want to start each body paragraph with a topic sentence. The first topic sentence should be: The spread of misinformation about vaccines has caused people to ignore FDA guidelines. Then, everything in the paragraph should relate ONLY to that cause. Conclusion: You can keep what you have, but be sure to restate the thesis and summarize each main point. Internal Citations: You don\u2019t have any of this information cited in the paper. If there is an author, you will want to use their last name. If there is no author, you will want to use the name of the article. If there is no date, you will want to put n.d. for \u201cno date.\u201d If there are multiple authors, you will want to follow this link for directions on how to do the internal citations with more than one author. https:\/\/owl.english.purdue.edu\/owl\/resource\/560\/03\/<\/p>\n
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